After reading the poem "The Clod and the Pebble" we made a poem with a similar structure. The poem is about a dialogue between a Clod and a Pebble, they tell what love is depending on how they are.
'Love is just a game
'Love is just a game
For people that don´t matter what IT means
Or neither felt
When a heart breaks'
Mom told Dad
With fear in her brain
Trying not to shout
Yet crying herself
'You don´t understand what love really is
Love is fighting if jealousy appears
Instead of talking with normal appearance'
What do I think?
Dad is lovesick
But I am released
´Cause dad is ready to live in peace
Between prison bricks
Between prison bricks
What´s interesting about this poem is that it leaves the reader thinking about what the ending means. You have dared to express some thoughts or feelings in the shape of metaphors. Good job!
ResponderEliminarA couple of corrections:
Stanza 1: IT means.
Stanza 2: Yet crying herself.
Stanza 3: What do I think?
Congratulations!
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